A treatment is a short, written description of what the viewer can expect to see in a film. The following is the second draft of my treatment along with quick sketches for every ~50 words.
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Challenges thus far!- Transitioning seamlessly from 3D to 2D schematic from #11 to 12 (e.g. outline 3D model and morph it into 2D schematic)
- Incorporating NGF regulatory pathways in a visually please manner, not just static 2D flowchart (#13)
- Transitions between hands and cellular environment (#13 to #14)
- Story feels a bit disjointed from #12 to #14
- Is it necessary to have "appreciate the environment" segment at the beginning? How to guide the eye
- Need to consider RoA (region of attention) in each panel - how to direct this?
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